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RatedDX
Joined: 16 Nov 2006
Posts: 4
Location: Somewhere in Texas
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| Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 2:25 am Post subject: D-Generation Next Chapter One Part One: Home Hated Home |
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*Narrated Introduction by Rated DX playing the role of Fred*
No Man is Created Equal....Every Human has their own special skills....But Man has one thing in common.....What comes as Life always finishes off in Death
Los Santiago was home to Me,The Family,Friends,and Strangers but things started changing.....changing for the worse ever since I left LS to start a new life in Capital City
*Scene Goes to Fred at the LS Airport*
It was about 3 years since I got a message
*Cell Rings*
Fred: Hello
Voice: Sup Bro
Fred: Jason hows it going bro hows Ma
Jason: Terrible....Shes Dead bro............
*Scene switches to a Taxi Driving Fred Back to his Old Home when a Police Car Stops it*
Officer#1*On Intercom*: Passenger Get out of the Vehicle with your hands behind you head
*Fred Gets out and lays on the Ground*
Officer#1: Well well well it seems we got our old Gang banger Jones
Officer Jones: Doesn't Surprise me Rake I would have rather find a Fat man
Officer Rake: Hows it going Fred
*Scene then moves out with Indistinct Conversation then switches to a Police Station*
Officer Jones: Why did you come back here Freddy things were going Fine without you around
Fred: You Know Damn well My Moms Dead
Officer Jones: I'll be happy to take you there under one Condistion
Officer Rake: You will not leave this country for any reason unless given the permission by us
*Scene Goes blank with the words TO BE CONTINUED...* |
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Gopher
Joined: 01 Jun 2005
Posts: 3033
Location: In a hole....
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| Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 1:36 pm Post subject: |
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| So, is this your rendition of San Andreas? |
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RatedDX
Joined: 16 Nov 2006
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Location: Somewhere in Texas
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| Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 7:22 pm Post subject: ... |
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| Yeah I like the Narration and Role The Characters play but I though I change names and places and what happens in the story it was something I came up with several months ago I rarely Touched on |
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