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[Pyro]

~Two Years Prior~
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The snowboard he was riding ripped through the ground as he smirked and kicked off the jump. Two spins, one flip, and now hold upside down and... crash.

"HAHAHA! THAT SUCKED!" Voices were flyin' from everywhere as the boy rolled through the snow and came to an abrupt stop against a rock. "Man Zane, that really bit the big-" the voices were hollowed out by a large rumbling as the three boys looked at each other. Up farther on the mountain, an avalanche began to rumble down the mountain as people screamed and began to get as far away from it as possible. Zane jumped to his feet as the other boys took off down the mountain, they were about half way up it. Probability said they were going to die.

The air raced as the boys shredded down the mountain, dodging trees and rocks and bushes as much as possible. Zane raced ahead of them, speeding as fast as possible before he turned back to see both Tyler and Jaimie fall to the snow bounding down. He pushed himself harder and harder until the snow toppled down on top of him, and he two was in cased. He was under the snow for half a day before he was found, Tyler had lost his cap and his jacket in the crash and froze to death, Jaimie was impaled on a tree.

~Current Day~

"Thanks man," Randy Zane said stepping out of the shop and throwing his board over his shoulder as he walked. He had straps attached simply so he could carry it on his back, before he readjusted the tightness and dawned his crimson colored goggles. He had changed his hair from black to blond, and now he kept his facial hair down to a stubble as he placed his cold hands in his pockets. He was back in town of the avalanche and almost instantly he realized, it was his first time back since they found him in the snow. As his boots thromped into the snow he passed McNulty's hardware store, where TV's were in the display case.

"This just in, two years who can forget the avalanche from no where that took the lives of two local boys Jaimie Cointrip and Tyler Colfer. Of the three boys on the mountain that day, one lived, local legend Randy Zane, who has recently returned to compete in the snowboarding competition, was rumored to be the luckiest man alive dawning his board 'Lucky Seven's Heaven" after making it down Seven Pike Run with a terrible avalanche chasing him." Zane couldn't help but stop and turn to the television screen as he smiled. His board was painted with a large red seven on the silver board, clouds floating around it. "Recently found in the mountain was a device apparently placed at the top of the mountain and detonated, not to form a blast but to send soundwaves which, would disrupt the mountain and cause an avalanche. We have reason the believe now, somebody was trying to kill the trio."

Zane's face contorted as he watched the tape of the device being played, his eyes watering slightly behind his thick leather strap goggles. "Both the boys who lost their lives will be missed, but it leaves one to wonder, what will happen to the survivor Randy Zane?"

"I'll kill them," Zane growled. "That's what."

[punketrox]

Holy Crap! Dang dude, were'd 'ya learn to write like that!!! Hey, I have a great idea. You should remix it to where its the rowdyruff boys, and boomer is the one who lives, (not to play favorites, my favorite is butch, but I just think boomer would be good for the part...) and the end has a surprise twist to it.......the other 2 boys LIVE! They were just unconcious the whole time!!!!!!!!! Wow, dude. Keep it up!!! :woot:

[Pyro]

(OOC: Just so you realize, it's an RP. And to answer your how you write that well? I've been writing since I was fourteen, so practice makes perfect)

[punketrox]

oh, well, I really dont understand what RP stands for. What does that mean??? :?:

[Pyro]

(OOC: RP means Roleplay. It's where each person makes a character, places them (fittingly) into the story, and takes turns writing out the story pretty much.)