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[King Powerpuff]

The Powerpuff Girls were at home, feeling they did their job by saving the day, but the others still had their work for them, as the battle had yet to be won. Before King Powerpuff decided to charge heroically, He looked down below and saw the entire rainbow of powerpuffs, which reminded Him of when all the powerpuff mutants defeated Dick Hardly from a long time ago. What reminds Jay of this the most is the diversity of a powerpuff population, yet while all of them had their differences (and sometimes flaws, names/titles especially), this seemed so natural and so right, because nothing in nature is alike or perfect, not Blossom and not even Himself. Aside from the powerpuff population, this was demonstrated with the trees of life, for all you have to do is look in any wooded area and see that all trees are different and none of them are perfect.

As the Powerpuff Girls see the entire army of powerpuffs in the sky at their home, one bold one charged, with a golen glow the blinded anyone that looked at it. With the blazing presense of the one they knew was going to be their savior, the speed metal guitar started blazing with a soundtrack inspired by Dragonforce! Blossom cried out "Take 'em down, Chief!" He knew He wasn't going to have any problems in the battle. As He charged into battle, the villains (Tuffs, Rowdyruffs, Him, and almost all you can imagine and more) have stood on the ground, blazing fire and flames of evil towards the charging hyperhero! The hero, Jay, drew His nukesaber while charging through the fire and the flames. If you can see the mob of citizens crowding to watch the epic battle of the fates, you can see a few cameo appearences including Craig McCracken and a few other powerpuffs, some also in Squad Scout uniform. The three tuffs charged right at Jay's glorious might, being the first victims of the seemingly awemazing nukesaber. He was ready for this; this was His speciality, with being a superhero supersoldier and such.

As Him was there with the three innocent powerpuff citizens, Jay jetted across the thunderstorm sky, creating a golden streak. Him started to shake, obviously in shock of the powerful presense. Now Jay isn't a god or anything, but that doesn't make a difference with the impression He left in the minds of the world. One powerpuff in Squad Scout uniform cheered "Take 'em down, General!" Despite Jay was only ranked Master Chief because officer ranks aren't permitted to minors, He still had more influence and respect than the forsaken president! As the villains attacked the powerpuffs in the sky that blotted out the sun, the other regulars and the rest of the powerpuffs could handle their own, which included the famous Squad Scout 450th Batallion, better known as The Powerpuff Brigade for consisting of nothing but powerpuff/rowdyruff members! As the other villains ranging from common thugs to imperial soldiers to iconic supervillains like Mojo Jojo and Morbucks were there were held at bay from the fleet of powerpuffs, Jay was then able to pursue Him. As Him was attacking behind himself with beams and rapid-fire bursts of pure evil, Jay was able to evade and deflect every incoming shot. Eventually, Him ducked behind a few corners and walls, which made him feel comfortable with feeling like he lost the Golden Knight. Just then, Him looked right in front, and there He was, sticking His saber right at the throat of Him.

Just then, lightning exploded atop not only our Chosen One, but also atop the hostage RRN regulars, the Powerpuff Girls, and over half of the powerpuff fighters. IT was ... it was....the master of evil, the success of them all, the teacher of him...THE OVERLORD! Staring with his evil grin, he oversaw the Powerpuff Girls, in the ruins of their home that he just created at that moment with his storm, too tired and hurt to fight. He also found more flat bodies on the ground than what there were on D-Day, over half of them powerpuff. The Overlord greatly resembled that of Jay, and aside from his stance and the aura he physologically implants into people, he would be mistaken for Jay.

The three hostages were also incapacitated from the sudden lightning storm, and Him dropped them, taking them for dead. The Overlord scolded, "FOOL! always make sure your hostages are dead." Then he smacked Him on the back of his pointy head. Him actually apologized to him, and checked to see if they were alive, and more importantly, if they were still of value. The Overlord smirked "Everything is as I have forseen. Now is the time for the last piece to click." As that happened, the earth was pummeled with a meteor shower that no one expected for two reasons : 1, the timing was perfectly planned by The Overlord and 2, clouds and whatever's left of the powerpuff army was blocking any sign or warning of a meteor shower. With the unprecidented timing of this, all good was inable to continue fighting save The Chosen One, and being able to feel the spiritual energy surrounding Him, the strong dark presence almost broke Jay, as if that seemed possible. A practically drowned Jedi-based superhero didn't seem much of a threat to Him, but The Overlord knew that He would still fight despite for being engulfed in evil. So, as The Overlord predicted a final bout, he once again scolded Him. Jay may have been literally shocked and almost consumed, but He was still not to be underestimated, and The Overlord knew this especially.

With a moment's notice, The Overlord charged at Jay, engaging his ruby red nukesaber. By the time he reached our hero, He stabbed Him with a quick thrust through the brain, permanatly defeating Him. As The Overlord reached The Golden Knight, they prepped with the traditional X-formation of sabers to commence honorable saber dueling. This is the beginning of a duel of the fates. Jay's tunic was blackened by the carbon scoring from the war-like fighting to the point where it looked like Luke Skywalker's outfit from Return of the Jedi during the Death Star II saber fight. From then on, it was only a matter of skill with a lightsaber/nukesaber. As the honorable duel was fought, everyone else, regular and powerpuff alike, watched in awe of the two sabers clashing like a brilliant laser light show. Every so often, The Overlord would toss random debris at The Chosen One, but mostly such was in vein. After what seemed like an eturnity of Spartan battling, neither good nor evil was losing any steam, and they both seemed absolutely equal in combat prowess.
How would our hero beat the ultimate evil? Did the one-day-war finally die down, or will it reignite? Who will survive to tell the tale? We'll find out, and be sure to give some imput, for that may help decide the future...

[punketrox]

I actually have a few things to say about that.

1. It was good, very discreptive
2. Did you use my evil-tuffs? If you did, thankies!
3. I kind of think this is taking over the whole God vs devil armegeddon scene, And i kinda dont like that
4. The use of many flat ppgs didnt make any since to me, cuz when did that happen?
5. When you say a rainbow of powerpuffs, do you mean the rr.net regulars?

Thats my questions. Overall, very good!

[King Powerpuff]

punketrox wrote: I actually have a few things to say about that.

1. It was good, very discreptive
2. Did you use my evil-tuffs? If you did, thankies!
3. I kind of think this is taking over the whole God vs devil armegeddon scene, And i kinda dont like that
4. The use of many flat ppgs didnt make any since to me, cuz when did that happen?
5. When you say a rainbow of powerpuffs, do you mean the rr.net regulars?

Thats my questions. Overall, very good!

1. thank you.
2. I did.
3. Acknowledged. I'm not a religion-based person, but I do think it's cool to be radiating with radiation to a level of a nuke; pretty indominable if you ask me. Maybe I can tone it down in the future; make it seem less...of this nature. Also, for a trivia note, Him was originally based off the devil, but the creators didn't want any religions affiliation. So, that may be one reason that bolsters the feeling of an "armegeddon scene."Thanks for the critism.
4. War happened. they fought, many either fainted or possibly died. a swarm of villains fought back, and an entire population's worth of powerpuffs fought that evil. People fall flat when either incapacitated or dead. That doesn't even include the lightning storm when Him got cornered...yet it also did, just it added to the body count. It might have happened when Him was trying to give the slip.
5. Partially. Yes, I did have the regulars in mind, but I was also focused on powerpuff diversity. As stated, it reminded me of the powerpuff episode in Season 4, titled Knock it Off, when Dick Hardly, an old college roommate of the professor's, decided to mass-produce powerpuffs. It was the feel of diversity that I was reflecting on, but yes I did have a few of the regulars in mind, particularly those mentioned in your version.

Just for the note, I'm very paranoid about people stealing my ideas, so please treat all my productions as if they were legally bound under copyright protection.

[punketrox]

Im glad I could be a help.

Oh and dont worry! Even when i need something somewhat similiar to a story of someone's, I would ask first.

Appreciatin'!