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1_Dangerous_Fire_Girl



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Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 6:29 pm    Post subject: soon to rrn forums  

im making a story that take place in the universe of alice academy or gakuen alice i hope you will read it its my first one
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Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 8:26 pm    Post subject:  

So... where is it? :)
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Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 8:41 pm    Post subject:  

^_^ It's invisible! We must go on a treasure hunt for it~
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1_Dangerous_Fire_Girl



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Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 8:50 pm    Post subject:  

im not done with first chapter yet
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1_Dangerous_Fire_Girl



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Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 9:09 pm    Post subject: black daimond  

this story take place in the universe of alice academy or gakuen alice the man charcaters are natsume and my oc enjoy.

chapter 1

Alice Academy:
is a raning day everyone is inside the bulldings except for a girl who just step out of a guy´s car to her it was her first day at alice academy.

"i dont understand why i have to start here i didnt do anything wrong" said the girl "i know sis but our parents thought it will be a good idea after what happend" said the guy "but big brother it was an accident i couldnt control it" said the girl with tears in her eyes the guy hug her " i know it was sis and dont worry is propely only for a short time and i have heard that they are nice here" said her big brother "but brother i cant bear been away from my family" said the girl crying "listing nina i want to give you somthing" said her brother " what is it?" asked nina her brother pulled out a present " open it " said her brother nina opens the present inside was a pic a letter and a cellphone " oh brother its to much i dont know what to say" said nina " when you start in your new class read the letter promise me that" said nina´s brother well hugging her "i promise" said nina well hugging her brother then her brother drived away leaving nina to walk up to the main bullding.
"ah you must be nina welcome to alice academy im narumi-sensei" said narumi "pleasure to meet you sensei" said nina "pleasure all mine" said narumi well taking nina bagage "now follow me and i will show you to your room" said narumi after awhile they reach the room that should be ninas room nina noticed a room with a name on it " sensei whos natsume hyuuga?" asked nina cost narumi to freeze "sensei?" asked nina again " natsume hyuuga? well his one of your classmates he has the fire alice ...... verry dangerous" answered narumi "fire alice? hmmm" said nina " is something wrong nina-chan?" asked narumi " no im fine its just i belive i havnt told you my alice" answered nina "hmmm your right you havnt what is your alice?" asked narumi.

in class 2-b
"dear students we have a new student today please welcome nina nyuuga" said narumi everyone turned their head to the door except for natsume who was sleeping under his manga " arhm nina wouldnt you come in here please?" asked narumi nina slowly appeared in the door "uhm hello" said nina " well thats better" said narumi smiling "natsume wake up" said ruka "ruka what is it? im sleeping" asked natsume " maybe you want to see this" answered ruka natsume removed the manga and looked up at nina " who is that?" whispered natsume to ruka "her name is nina nyuuga i dont know more" whispered ruka back natsume looked at nina who was looking down "nina why dont you go and find a seat?" said narumi pushing nina to walk " uhm i i i i " said nina in accident her hat she was wearing fll of exploring her long dark purple hair "wooooooooow" sound the classroom "oh oh " said nina well she trying to cover her face natsume walked up to her and moved the hand away "dont" said natsume "but everyone got scared" said nina well looking into natsume´s eyes he looked back at her "its fix you" said natsume "uhm thanks" said nina blushing "well then how about nina is sitting with natsume?" asked narumi " yaaaaay" sounded the classroom.
in the break " hey nina who do you think you are?" asked Sumire
"what?" asked nina "you heared me dont think you can come here and steal natsume" said Sumire madly " i i dont know what you talking about j just leave me alone" said nina well gets up to leave "not so fast " said Sumire well grabing nina´s hand and twist it which bring back bad memories for nina " NO LET GO!!!" screamed nina and by accident she releashed her alice which is blowing fire "wth????" asked Sumire everyone came runing "what is going on here?" asked narumi "sensei she used her alice against me " said Sumire " is that true nina?" asked narumi " i i didnt meant to" answered nina well by accident she releashed her alice again " nina stop this right now " ordered narumi " i cant its out of control but soundly the fire dissapeared leaving a tried nina who fanited into natsume´s arms who appeared behind her "natsume?" asked narumi "what nina is telling is true she cant control her alice"said natsume well caring nina to the hospital leaving the others stunned.

three day past by without nina waking up cost te others to get worried
"doctor" said narumi well walking into the hospital " narumi-sensei" said the doctor "any sign?" asked narumi "no she is still asleep" answer the doctor "oh my" said narumi.

after a week nina finaly shown sign of awaken
narumi came runing into the class room "everyone hurry up nina is starting to wake up" said narumi runing back to the hospital followed by class 2-b at the hospital nina had woke up but some how looking sad when class 2-b enter the room "everyone" said nina pretend to be happy "nina we are so sorry we didnt know that your alice gets out of control" said Sumire "its okey surumi" said nina "nina ..... i found this" said natsume well giving nina the letter " my brother´s letter i thought i lost it thanks natsume" said nina happy "you have a brother????" asked everyone "yeah you should meet him" said nina well opens the letter soundly she went stunned "well what does it say?" asked surumi well natsume sites down behind nina reads the letter aswell "it says: thinking of you wherever you are we pray for our sorrow to end and hope that our hearts will blend now i will step forward to relaised this wish and who knows starting new journey may not be so hard or maybe is already begun there many worlds but they share the same sky one sky one destiney" said natsume everyone looked at nina " my my brother used to tell me this prom every night before i went to sleep i thought he had forgot it" said nina with tears in her eyes "nina someone wants to see you" said narumi who appear in the door " me? who can that be?" asked nina her qustion got answered when a tall guy appeared in the door nina eyes shut open "b brother?" asked nina " nina i came as fast as i could when i heard what happend" said nina´s brother well runing to her bed " brother y you here " cryed nina well she jumped out of bed and runing to her brother " nina im glad your okey" said her brother well hugging her " brother" said nina still crying but then notice everyone stared at them " oh sorry everyone this is my brother dennis" said nina " pleasure to meet you all" said dennis "but brother what are you doing here?" asked nina "your brother have been given student place here in alice academy" answered narumi " what but brother havnt you done the school?" asked nina " well yes but it dosnt hurt take once more right?" said dennis "brother" said nina sweat drops making everyone laugh soon joined by nina and dennis.

few weeks past by and nina is still in hospital to recover nina are sleeping in the hospital bed when a redhair guy enter followed by his guard "leo i dont know how you did it but we came past the guards safely" said the guard "the only thing i did was to make narumi belive that i had changed after last time then it all went by itself" said leo who two times after his periode as student had returned first to kidnap natsume which almost worked then he tryed to make all students to destroy the academy now hes here again " so leo why do you want kidnap nina?" asked the guard "well its simple if i have nina as hostage natsume will come and rescure her and then we have both fire alice owner" answered leo" you have been hired by michelle arnt you?" asked the guard " that too" answered leo then they walk up to ninas bed leo pulled out a pice of cloth with clofrom in it "now grab her hands" ordred leo the guard grabed nina hands making her wake up " w what is going on?" asked nina before leo covered nina´s mouth with the clofrom cloth "mmphf" said nina try to get up but was pulled back by leo and the guard after awhile the clofrom had make nina to sleep "there take her to the limo and make sure nobody hears her" ordred leo the guard toke nina to the limo tied her up and gagged her "here you go michelle" said the guard "good work now leave i want to be alone with her when she woke up" said michelle "yes" said the guard and leaves the limo.
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