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Sean



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Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 7:21 pm    Post subject: First real try with MS Paint  



What does everyone think?
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Cutie



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Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 7:22 pm    Post subject:  

cute ^___^
glad im not the only one that uses MSP!!!
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Sean



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Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 7:25 pm    Post subject:  

Thank you! *hugglez*

MS Paint UNTIE! :lol:
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Cutie



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Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 7:35 pm    Post subject:  

awww *huggles back* :dance: MSP rules!!!!!
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Hana~Flower



Joined: 22 Oct 2005
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Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 9:01 pm    Post subject:  

I use msp too, sometimes. When I'm too lazy to draw with mah hands!
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TMBpower



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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 5:20 am    Post subject:  

Would you mind some constructive critique? I don't want to sound mean or anything, so let me know if you would. :P
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Sean



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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 7:15 pm    Post subject:  

TMBpower wrote: Would you mind some constructive critique? I don't want to sound mean or anything, so let me know if you would. :P

I wouldn't mind it. Everyone is entitled to their opinion. :D

RRB:

Brick :



Boomer :



Butch :



Criticize away!
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ScaryFairy



Joined: 01 Jun 2005
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Location: UK

Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 9:31 pm    Post subject:  

I started off using MSPaint also. Those were the good old days :P

The only suggestion I would make, would be to not use the same outline for each one. Making them slightly different gives them more of a character. But I understand your still fairly new at this. But apart from that, its pretty good. clean lineart. Neat colouring. Now just add some shading and your sorted :D
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Puff Hunter



Joined: 28 Dec 2008
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Posted: Tue May 12, 2009 2:20 am    Post subject:  

I assume you're using a mouse, not a tablet. In which case I'm even more impressed. All I can draw with a mouse is squiggles. And straight lines, but that's only if I use the line tool. (Yeah, yeah, I know; that's cheating. XD)

Anyway. Criticism. The things that stick out from where I sit are that the faces don't take up enough of the space on the heads, and the arms are too skinny. (Or too bendy, depending on your intent. You can have fleshy arms with graceful curves or bony arms with rigid upper and lower halves. You can't have bony arms with graceful curves.)

Oh, and Brick's hair is orange, not literally red.
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Sean



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Posted: Tue May 12, 2009 8:28 pm    Post subject:  

Puff Hunter wrote: Oh, and Brick's hair is orange, not literally red.

I no but I have no orange :(

Also I didnt use a mouse I have a laptop. I use a touch pad
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Cutie



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Posted: Tue May 12, 2009 9:10 pm    Post subject:  

MSP has no orange??? :/
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Sean



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Posted: Tue May 12, 2009 9:22 pm    Post subject:  

Mine doesn't :cry:
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Puff Hunter



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Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 3:12 am    Post subject:  

If it's not there, you can add it to the palette. Double-click one of the color boxes, and it'll bring up a window where you can set the color to anything your monitor can handle. This page explains it in more detail.
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Sean



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Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 3:31 am    Post subject:  

Thank you puff hunter! :D
Fixed it
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